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Flat Feeling

By Archery OwlPublished 8 months ago Updated 8 months ago 1 min read

It wraps around my mind’s eye

The false seer’s words wield power as I stumble in dark clouds of truth and fiction. Here I find a cascade of doubt enveloped in fear

I cry in the darkness

How many ways can I say I’m sorry when flat feelings erupt? How many times can I seek forgiveness for believing this prophet?

Help is near but far - it seems

Stream of Consciousness

About the Creator

Archery Owl

Father and Friend

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