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Falling Through The Ice

Panic icy breathless sinking down down down

By Marie381Uk Published 11 months ago 1 min read
George’s Girl 2025

Falling Through The Ice

Beneath the Ice

Falling—

a sudden crack,

a breath stolen mid-gasp

as the world gives way beneath.

Cold fists wrap tight,

pulling, swallowing,

lungs burn with silence,

fingers scrape at glassy walls—

no door, no way out.

Light shimmers above,

so close, so far,

a blurred ghost of what was.

Heart slows, shadows stretch,

the ice holds tight.

sinking down down

And then—

nothing.

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About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Mark Graham11 months ago

    Good work on a poem that is all about fear and dying.

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