
It has fallen down,
Lying still on the ground,
Waiting till breath no longer sounds,
Waiting till no one is around.
With eyes that won’t shut,
With a mind that won’t rut,
With a gut that won't give up.
Survival mode: ON,
With fiery ambition,
Uprooted but never gone,
Always ready to fight on!
Not all who stand are strong,
So why must the fallen be lost for long?
For we are not wrong,
Keep singing the faith song.
Continue where we are,
Be graceful, be of use, like the papaya,
Nurturing the earth, feeding the hungry,
Fallen but fruitful, forever in memory.
About the Creator
Aisyah Hani
Loves spreading positivity, sharing Malaysian and not-so-Malaysian life stories with a touch of sales wisdom. Enjoy!😊
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Fabulous 📕✍️🏆👌♦️♦️
Oooo, this was so profound and powerful. Loved it!
Beautiful...
Wow! You have conveyed a very deep and wonderful message in your poem. Amazing! ✨