Fading calories
Self-destructive ego in action
Hampered down by pain I cry at night,
Forgotten lies shattered, no light,
Hearts once close now drift apart,
Love fades with each lost breath,
Shadows of the past,
Calories fade,
Deadly end,
So long,
Blown.
About the Creator
Gabriela Trofin-Tatár
Passionate about tech, studying Modern Journalism at NYU, and mother of 3 littles. Curious, bookaholic and travel addict. I also write on Medium and Substack: https://medium.com/@chicachiflada & https://chicachiflada.substack.com/
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Comments (3)
Very sad! Without fuel a fire dies. Well done, Gabriela!
This felt so visceral. Sad, but beautifully composed, Gabriela! Well done!
Like your choice of words , brilliant