Eclipse photo by Melissa Ingoldsby
Eye of God
Captured in a precise
Looming beam, haunting my brain
In a hazy, deeply fried-dark dream
Please don’t forget us sinners
Sunning masses, in the mist of the future
Event of staring into creation’s darkness, behind your halo of veritable beauty
About the Creator
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Comments (3)
Beautiful and thoughtful acrostic! ☺️ “Deeply fried dark dream” - now I’m hungry! Nah, joking but I did really like that line!
Oooo, your Acrostic was so profound and your photo is so beautiful!
Loved how this started off with 'eye of God'. Such a cool take on the challenge, and the personal picture was a wonderful bonus!!