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Extinction

Indoctrinated

By Irvin Published about a year ago 1 min read

Set in motion an extension of a baphometic prophecy
Condemned by fate from the field of bloodshed
That only prisons scotched hearts of animosity.
Like a war veteran, I'm on a persuit of cold vengeance with a compass mind that leaves trails of unforgiveness
Away with the soul as it struggles to empty itself from the craft of existince, Beneath the vile nature of a corrupted soldier
That has sold his pain to a configured tyrant

The covenant of truth between the mind and heart is redefined
As the atomic figure stretches towards reasoning of contextualization,
for the body's heartless execution
A collusion of remorseful memories and sympathy for peace is set alight
A testament to an awakening revelation.
Although well aware of his gravitational pull towards his untimely death
He refuses to be led astray by a peace treaty.

With a mind that feeds off questioned torment and an extraterrestrial entity encapsulated to a functional body,
Whilst conditioned for combat like a prime gladiator.
His only option to conquer internal chaos is through the infiltration of one's undying agony.
The effects of unnurtured war wounds is the cause of reaching the ends of an untraveled destiny.
The completion of a scattered puzzle piece seems unchallenged by the capabilites of an enraged soldier.

Stuck in a cage of his own pattern of thoughts
The reassurance of closure he seeks from his spiritual being
brings nothing but tears to his blind-folded eyes.
The realization that portion of himself is stuck to the old ways of endless vengeance
while he's trying to persevere through the daunting darkness.
As he puts the blade of carnage to rest, amongst those that have fallen victim to it
A new profound perception of life is born.
What lies ahead of him is a journey of self-acceptance that will result to the freedom of his incriminated pain.

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Irvin

Exceptionally artistic when it comes to poetry, my undying passion for it for keeps me writing like always.

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  • Testabout a year ago

    Incredible work.

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