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Exquisilipse

My Witness to the Eclipse

By Ace MeleePublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Collage of the process of the eclipse, taken by me.

Enchanting without the douse of gray airy globs of obscurity,

Cultivating a temporary sunset facade on a summer day.

Luna, the nocturnal celestial, greets us with her graceful brother behind her.

I take the spell to be a kid again– found the lost excitement, not even

Photos on a mobile device can

Save the thorough visuals that I stored behind my

Eyes.

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About the Creator

Ace Melee

-Mainly a horror and fantasy writer.

-I post stories, poetry, and scripts on Vocal. My preferred audience is older teens and adults, but I can adjust for younger teens.

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  • Rachel Deemingabout a year ago

    This is great! I love that throwback to the wonder of being a child in the face of an eclipse. I know exactly what you mean.

  • Mariann Carrollabout a year ago

    I love how you end this poem. Very poetic 💞

  • Ameer Bibi2 years ago

    Amazing 🤩🤩 welldone superb story

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