A bubble gun exploded the other day,
And as they pop and ascended into the atmosphere,
So did the eardrums of the civilians they laughed at.
I thought I knew the details of their souls,
The aching,
The urging.
I thought my own cavities and bullet wounds had tied themselves up with a bow
And decorated my eyes gracefully with a hint of glitter for the next little night out
Time to exist like I'm not even trying
Isn't that what they tell us?
To not pick your nails
Or else they'll be ruined and someone'll lose interest.
They don't realise that the skin being pulled and tugged down to the knuckle
Is a restrained release of my privately considered opinions,
And not the explosion of colour I wish they'd stop denying my parched lips.
The bubble gun, it exploded by its own free will
That was programmed into the blood it shed
For the sake of the good of the world.
About the Creator
Ruby Red
Heya friend, I'm Red!
I write poetry, so subscribe for a hint of vulnerability, some honesty and the occasional glimpse behind my mask π±
Taking a break from Vocal; focusing on my anthology π«Άπ
AI is not art.
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