Will it miss?
The potential?
In the spiral, will
the appeal of the exit
light my way?
Is it your hand i’m seeing,
reaching from the chaos?
How long will I spend looking between
you and the door?
How much longer can you
keep yelling my name?
And finally, what if at the end,
when I reach for you,
through the confusion and debris,
the light of the exit sign
catches your eye too?
About the Creator
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Good effort
You have potential. Keep practicing and don’t give up!
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Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
The steps to losing a child
Step One: Lose a child. Not what anyone wants to happen and nothing you can do to change it, but you can go through steps to becoming happy again. You can go through steps to loving again. You can go through steps to become a new you because after losing a child you will never be the same person you once were.
By Tabitha Hinkley3 days ago in Fiction
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