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Exceeding the Tradition

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By Esala GunathilakePublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Exceeding the Tradition
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It's slap bang at the middle of the green field,

Yet one man is there to change the movements,

Hey, the ball is passed,

The blues are moving ahead,

A blue is covering a yellow,

And a yellow is covering a blue,

Oh! What an impressive Rabona pass,

Again the ball is with a blue,

Two yellows are hurrying up either side,

All the efforts are made by legs,

The blues are about to the goal,

One curved the ball,

A yellow judged with the head,

Now it's yellows',

Sweat is a blessing to relieve the pain,

All are rushing to winning the game,

Now the ball is up in the air,

A blue crossed and bicycled it,

That turned on the blues blood,

Respect!

Again an amazing shoot to the nearer at the goal,

No more thinking,

Blocking the breathing,

The blue is making,

Amazing kicking,

Goalie is jumping,

No ball touching with the hand,

His feet saved the ball in the air,

Rocking cutting amazing blocking,

mesmerizing to see,

Love those legs to the moon and back,

A game finished with no goals,

Life is just like that,

We are trying,

And others also try,

So, at the first chance, we may lose,

But never stop trying!!!

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About the Creator

Esala Gunathilake

I am an enthusiastic writer who feel the sense of humanity. Thus, I can write stanzas, short stories, novels, articles and blogs as well. I am a blog contributor for the Ananda College Engineer's Ink student chapter website.

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  • Christy Munson2 years ago

    Loved your poem. So much energy and passion for the game!

  • Pascal Ahams2 years ago

    I love this one

  • Ali SP2 years ago

    What a great lesson in this poem!

  • angela hepworth2 years ago

    You voice action so well here!! Awesome work!

  • Wow!! Loved it! Play by play and the end is great!! You would make a great announcer for the game!💕

  • Sasi Kala2 years ago

    The poem vividly captures the dynamic and passionate nature of a football match nice!

  • Novel Allen2 years ago

    Such great edge of seat action here. I am not sure who I was cheering for. Such an exciting game and poem.

  • With this you really, exceeded the scope of our traditional poetry titles! I must say this is an Outstanding work!!! Every line is super. And they seamlessly flow. Loved this...

  • Shirley Belk2 years ago

    love all the action and colors

  • Andrea Corwin 2 years ago

    No goals?? What is bicycling in this game? I liked your poem!!

  • Gloria Penelope2 years ago

    Wow! interesting poem!

  • Best! I love it!

  • Murali2 years ago

    This is a lovely poem. It's great!

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