I am not saving my best poems for a competition
I can't afford to enter and will never win.
I am not hiding my worst poems
for fear that someone will have an opinion.
I am steadily working my way through
and shredding the scraps
of doodled paper in my bedside table
on which my thoughts have been scattered.
Bringing it all together, I tell myself.
Although I know that hidden in the process
is the same old
clasping hope in which they were written,
months or years ago or yesterday:
this one, this one
this will clear out my heart.
(So far, nothing.)
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Excellent! Glad you're just writing poems for you, as it should be. Clearing out your heart though - that's a deep metaphor for a poem that started out quite whimsically.
Very relatable! Well done!
Ooo I like this one! Very authentic. Congrats on the top story!
congratulations!
yup.
Beautifully said. well done and congrats on the ts.
FEEL you! This poem needed to be top-storied, so I am appreciative that it was. Sending you BIG write vibes!
Oh yes, I hear you. Great poem.
This really spoke to me. For as much as I would like to be a successful writer...writing is much more than that for me. Well done on a beautifully written poem and congrats on Top Story. Also...just subscribed to you!
Always keep writing for it is very therapeutic. Sending you lots of love and hugs ❤️
I need to start writing mine on paper again, then I wont delete them permanently. Just write, like a flower. it will bloom brighter and brighter. You are doing great. Happy holidays.
Every heart-felt poem will find its reader. Merry Christmas!
Thank you for reminding me why I write 🫶