Evolution
a haiku about the movements of mountains
By Muchtar SuryawanPublished 3 years ago • 1 min read
Photo by Arvind Telkar on Unsplash
Continuously
You shift and erode and rise
You change, just like me
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I love how you took all that grandness and larger than life imagery and turned it inward with that last line. Yes, we do change. Excellent :)