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the love evaporated, vanished
you placed the blame on my shoulders
I carried it like Atlas
simultaneously
begging you for that
thing you couldn't
bring yourself
to give:
truth
About the Creator
Poppy
poetry in progress
the love evaporated, vanished
you placed the blame on my shoulders
I carried it like Atlas
simultaneously
begging you for that
thing you couldn't
bring yourself
to give:
truth
poetry in progress
Comments (11)
True that!! 😍 loved this.
Ouch. So much of this is so amazing. the opening to the line about atlas and that gutpunch ending! Well done, Poppy!
Excellent nonet!✅ The image fits perfectly! Is that Australia, I see on the globe?🧐
"I carried it like Atlas" 😍 Omg. I'm in love with that. Fabulous entry!
Gorgeous! You always create such a vivid space for your story, it's amazing!
Stunning work, Poppy! Love the image and allusion to Atlas
Oh that's fabulous and well thought. Liked it poppy.
This was so deep and true! Loved it!
Wow, this is poignant and profound!
A damn fine entry. Great job!
Oh,this one stings. Very well done.