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Ethereality

a poetic portrayal of immortality

By Emily Mary RosePublished 2 years ago 1 min read

Too long is the distance that exists between you and I,

Though the presence you emit falls angelically from the sky.

My celestial spirit; my star of the sea,

Your soul is not lost but is waiting for me.

With our birth place bejewelled by your enchantress,

The horizon embellished by the painting of your canvas,

A rose to the thorns of pain and envy.

The tranquillity of your light- an enthralling reverie.

So as the darkness descends it is you who scintillates,

Your spirit envelops me in ways I cannot articulate,

When hope is lost you keep me stargazing,

A tale of two souls that’s beautifully heartbreaking.

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About the Creator

Emily Mary Rose

Emily Hustwick is a neurodivergent poet endeavouring to communicate the painful woes of mental and chronic illness. If you find yourself lost amongst the verses and the prose, know that you will one day be found.

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  • Rachel Deeming2 years ago

    Lovely.

  • Such beautiful words, you paint such painful and poignant imagery ❤️

  • EYHCS2 years ago

    What a beautiful and powerful emotive poem. Thanks for sharing.

  • So tragically beautiful! You have a way with words!

  • Beautifully crafted Emily! The last line was splendid "A tale of two souls that’s beautifully heartbreaking". Girl, you nailed it every time. Loved it...xx

  • Rhazan's Pen2 years ago

    I can relate to this poem. Thank you for sharing.

  • Test2 years ago

    This is stunningly beautiful. So poignant and well done! This line 'The horizon embellished by the painting of your canvas,' Really caught me - so lovely! Thank you for sharing 🤍

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