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Eternity’s Claim

An Acrostic Sonnet

By Patrick M. OhanaPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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Every belief in eternity pales

’Tis foolhardy for any living thing

Entertaining a tenet with details

Responding to fear with a foolish king

Never could a faith belong to a world

Insidiously bent on a swift end

Tenaciously holding on to words hurled

Yearning for the impossible to blend

Severed ties and murdered lives do not raise

Consciousness or empathy in spades

Leaving the planet’s balance all ablaze

Abiding by feelings instead of grades

In which known realm do we pretend to see

More truth that only science can set free

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Benjamin Clementine - Eternity

Unfortunately, we will never meet again, except perhaps in fiction.

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About the Creator

Patrick M. Ohana

A medical writer who reads and writes fiction and some nonfiction, although the latter may appear at times like the former. Most of my pieces (over 2,200) are or will be available on Shakespeare's Shoes.

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