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Eternal

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By Aspen Marie Published 4 months ago β€’ Updated 4 months ago β€’ 1 min read
Top Story - September 2025
Photo: mine

One solitary key

Wood worn, ivory cracked

An artifact; vertebrae fossil

Of a time when hands

Danced across spine

Some pianos go to graveyards

Bleached skeletons unburied

Desiccated by the sun

Only memories of

Taut strings remain

Last night, five rows from

A glossy black Steinway

Heritage craft generations

Royal lineage gold embossed

There sat a man in tails

Dressed in his best

He pulled a handkerchief

From a tuxedo pocket

Wiping his brow

He swayed softly

As singing strings

Pulled at our souls

When it was time to begin

He took a breath

In it I saw

Holy prayers offered

On the altar of

Wood and bone

Auditorium held spellbound

By awesome skill

And peerless creation

Resurrecting Chopin

Alive again and thriving

Music survives through disciples

Piano Concerto #1

Sacrosanct dedication

Well-spent years

Not one wasted

When fingers rot

Upon timely demise

Eternal, silent repose

In dignified death

The bones of his hands

Will lie six feet under

Hard-won mastery

Will be all but forgotten

Until pupils, known and foreign

Hold their breath

Lay offerings

In holy chambers

Before exhaling a Nocturne

Opening heaven’s gates

To partake in

The communion of

Sacred and sublime

Music oxygenates blood

Infusing life beyond

Mundane muck and mire

We are all descendants of

Master craftspeople

Reincarnated into new flesh

Bones turn to dust

Wooden keys to ash

Sheet music to pulp

All that will be left

Are the notes

Commanding eternal angels

To herald their song

Long after we are gone

Free Verse

About the Creator

Aspen Marie

In love with life and all of its foibles.

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  • Antoni De'Leon4 months ago

    Beautiful.

  • Susan FourtanΓ© 4 months ago

    Very beautiful description and imagery. The picture is great.

  • Jamye Sharp4 months ago

    This was really quite good, and I liked it a lot. Love the theme of music that connects souls one to another across time.

  • Unusual and very descriptive, I'm lost in my own imagination when reading your poem, congratulations on Top Story xx

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! πŸŽ‰πŸ’–πŸŽŠπŸŽ‰πŸ’–πŸŽŠ

  • Marilyn Glover4 months ago

    Absolutely gorgeous poetry! Congratulations on your top story!

  • Paul Stewart4 months ago

    Oops/ Was going to say, Back to say, Lassie, congrats. Then realised I didn't comment originally. Oh well. Commence babble. This is stunnning - love like Krysha the symphonic description of music and the deserved beauty and praise given to a piano. As ever, proving us mere mortals that you are some kind of higher plains wordsmith we should usher in with due respect. And ganchos to the back of the knees. Obviously. Cos, I a prick. Loved this and congrats.

  • Krysha Thayer4 months ago

    Wow, such a symphony to describe the music and beauty of a piano. My grandfather would play for us when I was a child and I was always captivated. Very well written!

  • C. Rommial Butler4 months ago

    A well-wrought poetic meditation with a picture evocative of the theme!

  • I especially loved how you said that music oxygenates our blood. It's soooo true. Loved your poem!

  • Matthew J. Fromm4 months ago

    Have to ask, where’s the picture from?

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