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Beneath the Oak. Ekphrastic entry for Letters to the Moon Challenge.

By Paul StewartPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
Man and Woman Contemplating the Moon By Caspar David Friedrich - Web Gallery of Art:   Image  Info about artwork, Public Domain, https://commons.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?curid=15883870

As we take shelter 'neath an old oak tree,

we contemplate life, ad astra per aspera.

For as this mighty oak stands for centuries,

the moon, our lunar guide, stands for an Eterna.

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In the light of the celestials, we walk on.

Though paths waver and are not straight,

side by side, we continue towards the sun;

by moonlight, our very being battles fate.

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Tell me, O faithful companion in the sky,

do you recall all who have sought refuge—

all who've followed you with hopeful eyes

when lighting their path, or as waters deluge?

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Do you recall the fate of the Light Brigade,

when lives were led astray, mortality laid bare—

the needless miscalculations that were made,

as they galloped onward, not seeing the snare?

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As Crazy Horse and Chief Gall's charging raid,

Custer the hero, Custer undone by his hubris

or Varus who trusted what Arminius had said—

his men were ambushed in Teutoberg's abyss

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You see it all, do you not, our constant guide,

from your lofty domain, where the stars still shine.

You never discriminate, bringing light earthwide;

as the sun bids farewell, we know we’ll be fine.

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When we make love and have peace with one another,

work through our differences and overcome obstacles.

You oversee and observe, as a silent, infinite watcher

witnessing joy, sadness, success, and failure—all possible.

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You are eternal, you are forever our companion,

whom we can trust, unburdened and with ease—

from the highest peaks to the deepest canyons,

over the good green land and the deep blue seas.

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Thanks for reading!

Author's Notes: As has been the case recently, I was looking for inspiration in art for the poetry challenges. This painting by Caspar David Friedrich turned into a beautiful muse. You can find out more below about the painting and the historical events mentioned.

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Paul Stewart

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  • Mother Combs4 months ago

    Beautiful, Paul. Put goosebumps on my arms.

  • Kristen Balyeat4 months ago

    I absolutely adore this, Paul! I’ve often thought of all that gorgeous orb in the sky has been witness to. Loved the elegantly poetic and historic journey you took us on. Brilliant piece and a very strong entry!! ✨🩷🙌🏽

  • Imola Tóth4 months ago

    I love that to understand this poem, one actually needs some knowledge behind it already. I feel like it gives it a deeper meaning, like if you don't get it you're not part of the club. haha Great work!

  • Shirley Belk4 months ago

    I love the take on the moon being an unbiased observer rather than an instigator for love, werewolves, and monthly woes of cycling ovaries. I will have to give this some thought.

  • I like how you oncorporated a historic slant to this.

  • Mark Graham4 months ago

    What a great way to teach poetry as well as other subjects and topics. Good job.

  • Sean A.4 months ago

    Love seeing you going “back and forth” with the classical style and classic Paul. Very well done!

  • Aspen Marie 4 months ago

    ad astra per aspera... a 'new to me' phrase and yet a motto I love to live by. You've fully encompassed our relationship with the moon in clever, emotion-filled thoughts. Thank you for the illuminating journey... ... I will see myself out. Lad.

  • Silver Daux4 months ago

    Man, this is awesome. I love oaks especially of the old or ancient variety. They really do give off the impression of silent observers to everything. Well done!

  • D. J. Reddall4 months ago

    Having written an ekphrastic response to this poem myself, I am not surprised that you found it inspiring and produced a marvelous, poetic reply to it, my liege!

  • Matthew J. Fromm4 months ago

    I feel like you wrote this for me, did you? Nailed most my favorite images haha

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