Essential Oil, pour on my body
Smooth like Shea butter on my skin
Smell the Scent of ancient time
Enter relaxation
Feel the Sensation
Massage it in
Pour it on
Relax
melt
This is my Nonet poem for the smooth challenge. I hope the words in this poem made you feel relaxed. After a massage, I feel like melted butter. This poem makes me wish for a massage. You know the feeling, the sensation of falling into a smooth euphoric sleep after a good massage. The scent of a lavender essential oil is like a lullaby to a dreamland. Goodnight!
About the Creator
Mariann Carroll
Proactive for positive change.Born in the City of Chicago ,Illinois.
Multi race .Studied in a foreign country .Fluent in several languages .
fascinated by diversity.A Romantic and a dreamer.Interest in healthy living
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Comments (4)
You captured that feeling so perfectly in your Nonet! So well done!
Like drifting off into fading dreams.
Lovely & relaxing! You're on a roll my friend!
Great Nonet and entry