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Empty Spaces

From the depths of darkness.

By Angie LovedayPublished 4 years ago Updated 4 years ago 1 min read
Empty Spaces
Photo by Jeremy Bishop on Unsplash

Trudging on-

No joy, no light.

Who’s the dead one?

No end in sight.

*

Drowning-

Seas of sorrow surround me.

Waves over my head.

Just turn and let it be.

*

Painful memories-

Empty spaces.

Can I fill them?

Erase your traces?

*

Darkened rooms-

Silence invading.

Try to move on.

Your scent ’s decaying.

*

One more time-

Calling out your name.

The darkness hears…

*

And calls back like a game.

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"Empty Spaces" won an honorable mention in the poetry category at the Thirteenth Creative Writing Contest in French and English from the University of Costa Rica.

surreal poetry

About the Creator

Angie Loveday

An asexual Costa Rican filmmaker and writer fumbling her way through words, hoping to make some sense to the netizens. You can follow me online @ang_lovestheday

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