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Empty Space

By VJHDPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
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I have a cupboard full of keys that open doors to our past.

There is a crack in the lining of the universe where you fell through.

What is the colour of heartache in this busy life you left behind-

There’s a rainbow of alien colours but I’m lost in pink.

There was no echo of a gunshot yet the space is empty now.

Sometimes flowers grow where the grass is gone.

In the dirt and the stones are sandy weeds of salty white water.

A painting on canvas of an afterlife I can’t be a part of.

Is there any sense after death in the words of the living?

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About the Creator

VJHD

The subsistence of our lives will live on in our words, forever encapsulating our feelings.

Words are the centre point of our existence. If we never write anything down, did we ever really exist at all?

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