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Emotional Bank

…but I just didn’t like the imposter in me who was trying to take over…

By Rowan Finley Published 6 months ago 1 min read

I want to be recognized as a beautiful bug,

but instead,

I look more like a thug.

I’m not gonna strike or attack ya’,

I have a kind heart but I fierce appearance.

They tried to give me a makeover,

but I just didn’t like the imposter in me who was trying to take over.

Don’t judge my skin,

instead, hear my story to win…

my heart.

I feel my heartbeat pound a bit faster,

when I think about someone who is willing to hear me out.

Their listening ears are like an emotional bank,

that I’d gladly deposit all my stories, for as much as they are worth…

Stream of Consciousnesssurreal poetry

About the Creator

Rowan Finley

Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.

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  • Komal6 months ago

    Ahhh this one's tender! Maybe we’re all just bugs hoping someone sees past the shell.

  • I'm hearing you loud and clear. Keep sharing your raw honesty.

  • Karan w. 6 months ago

    I really loved it, deep and thought-provoking!

  • Archery Owl6 months ago

    Such deep beauty. I saw one of these today. I wonder what it feels like to turn into a butterfly? 🦋

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