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email exchanges with the moon

a poem (also a submission for the moon challenge (?))

By Mesh ToraskarPublished 2 months ago Updated 2 months ago 3 min read
Top Story - November 2025
September Moon, London

Re: Your Poem, Monday 9:12 pm

The Moon to Me:

‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎

I regret to inform you


your poem arrived

too muddy with fingerprints

You keep calling me a miracle


but forget the men

who planted a flag


in my throat


& called it arrival

called it a giant leap for mankind

as if falling upward


were something new

‎ ‎ ‎

You keep writing of hands

try again this time

without gravity

‎ ‎

Re: Your Poem, Monday 9:46 pm

Me
to The Moon:

Hey dude

You speak like someone

who has never dreamt of 


the dark side of the moon

Every time I reach for light


I come back


with dirt under my nails

Maybe that’s the point


to stay human is to keep

a little earth
in the mouth


so even prayer tastes


of home & iron

I send these poems your way


because what else
can I do


with the dark
but build

a small country
inside it

Re: Your Poem, Tuesday 10:31 pm

The Moon
to Me:

I have read your poem again,


& regret to inform you


that it trembles too much

They said one small step
but forgot


how many graves it takes


to build a ladder

Re: Your Poem, Tuesday 11:56 pm

Me
to The Moon:

once / when i was five / my mother left the lights on / said it keeps the ghosts away/the next morning / she was asleep on the floor / her palm open / like a cracked cup / i tried to pour the morning back into her /i am writing to you / because that same week / my mother / and her mother / adorned themselves in two-dollar sarees / twirling in a thrift store/ turning grief into glitter /suddenly junkyard artists / i had no language / only the rusted music / of inheritance / so i write / because that’s what i am / a junkyard artist / soldering memory / into meaning / i hope you understand/ mouth is a wound / where god opened us up / sometimes i open the fridge / just to see what shines / butter / beer cans / tinfoil ghosts /yes there is conceit/ in sitting down and writing about this /but there is conceit in writing at all / i’m still learning / thanks to you /how to live with the light / that doesn’t stay /

Re: Your Poem, Wednesday 12:42 am

The Moon to Me:

I regret to inform you

you were foolish enough to love

one place now you are an orphan

in a succession of shelters

they tell me you sleep well

the nights you press your face against

the granite in your kitchen and pretend

to be lichen trying to grow there

even Kahlo had to earn

her strangeness so what is with

you poets and the soft animal

of your bodies

you ask what keeps me bright -

i keep what cannot be buried

into the marbled skin of the earth

if there is a god here

he’s learning english from your letters

he keeps mispronouncing mercy

Re: Your Poem, Friday 1:19 am

Me to The Moon:

these are winter months

it’s the wrong season

to have a crush but

everything is possible

in the quickening dark

our bodies silver thanks to you

everything is possible

I think (?) with my body

but not always with language

I have lived here for eight years

and yet I am shocked every time it rains

only now my shock has years of rain in it

how the lit houses swallow half

the yawning sky the night not lit by you

***

surreal poetry

About the Creator

Mesh Toraskar

A wannabe storyteller from London. Sometimes words spill out of me and the only way to mop the spillage is to write them down.

"If you arrive here, remember, it wasn't you - it was me, in my longing, who found you."

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  • Harper Lewis2 months ago

    Love, love, love everything about this. Brilliant!

  • Melissa Ingoldsby2 months ago

    This is beyond genius art!!

  • I am out of my league here telling you what an absolute dream this entry is...

  • Gohar Ali2 months ago

    Great

  • Lola Sense2 months ago

    This is outstanding and truly original. You have such a powerful voice. I loved many parts, but I found the lines “so what is with you poets and the soft animal of your bodies” the most moving. Such beautiful, evocative imagery... Thank you for sharing your art with the world :)

  • I really like your take on this challenge, so creative, great work!

  • Morgana2 months ago

    holy shit, this: my mother / and her mother / adorned themselves in two-dollar sarees / twirling in a thrift store/ turning grief into glitter /suddenly junkyard artists junkyard artists?! So worthy of repetition there. And actually just all of it like i hope you understand/ mouth is a wound I love that you didn't use any articles there, just mouth, and and yet I am shocked every time it rains only now my shock has years of rain in it like ughhhhh that's so good OK, now I'm being a jerk because I want to give unsolicited feedback because this poem really shines and there's just one thing my curiosity wants to play with to see if it would explode: What if the timestamp sequence was going in reverse? Like it starts out "Re: My Poem," but time rewinds and the last stanza is the initial email with the first email, "My Poem", the poem to the moon? Idk idk though this is so good and I loved it.

  • Teresa Renton2 months ago

    Oh Mesh, I am beyond happy to see your name appear again, and here you are. You drop by, leave diamonds, then move softly on. I can’t dissect this succinctly so allow me just one or two indulgences: you ask what keeps me bright - i keep what cannot be buried — I want to frame this and put it on my wall. We learn the muddy fingerprints are from the dirt in your fingernails you mention later. I adore your prose section. I tried to pour the morning back into her—wow! And the whole junkyard artist metaphor is brilliant! The whole idea of making something, anything, from scraps of life, from memories, and -‘mouth is a wound / where god opened us up / sometimes i open the fridge / just to see what shines’ what an analogy 😮 The wound opens and …. But then, your line ‘i’m still learning / thanks to you /how to live with the light / that doesn’t stay /‘ tied in with moon’s light, is a heart wrenching gut punch. This one’s a winner 🥰

  • Mackenzie Davis2 months ago

    If this doesn't win first place, I am going to throw an absolute fit.

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