Alone
In a way only
Your own choices
Can make you.
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Pathetic
Is difficult to pity.
About the Creator
Roderick Makim
Read one too many adventure stories as a child and decided I'd make that my life.
I grew up on a cattle station in the Australian Outback and decided to spend the rest of my life seeing the rest of the world.
For more: www.roderickmakim.com
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It certainly is. Well done!
Wow. This packs a punch.
well done