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Eclipse, August Second 2025

Darkness meets the world

By Marie381Uk Published 6 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

Eclipse, August Second 2025

The air stiffens at noon

like it knows what’s coming

Birdsong cuts mid-note

as the light begins to shift

Shadows crawl across fields

wrong somehow

longer than they should be

darker than the hour allows

Children look up and fall quiet

hands raised but not touching

A silence settles

too wide for comfort

It’s not night

not day

but something between

where things slip loose

Even the trees look nervous

branches still

leaves refusing to rustle

as if holding their breath

For a moment

the sun forgets itself

lets the dark lean in

and we watch, helpless

No omen

no magic

just the sky

reminding us we’re small

And when it passes

when the light returns

we walk away

pretending nothing happened

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Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Mark Graham6 months ago

    What a perfect description and kind of neat to sit through if outside. Good job.

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