Eclipsing light, the moon's soft dance,
Casting shadows in its trance.
Luminous orb veiled by chance,
In celestial waltz, a cosmic romance.
Partial darkness, a fleeting glance,
Spectacle of the skies, a rare enhance.
Enchantment reigns in this cosmic expanse.
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About the Creator
The daughter of silence
It all started when Echo was five. She kept having these nightmares where she would just fall into a dark pit, screaming insanely loud, yet no one, not even her own parents would hear her. It was terrifying. But the most horrible part was that when she'd wake up panting, her parents were nowhere to be found, just like in her dream. She'd always cry herself to sleep alone and helpless.
By Anna Exclusive • about a year ago
Comments (7)
Beautifully penned!
I like how you have taken a positive spin on an event that most people think of with negative connotations Anna. "Luminous orb veiled by chance," is a line that stuck out to me, and I noticed you rhymed every line!
A well mixture of nice words. Well done!
This is well done, beautiful!
This was so beautiful and I loved that you made it rhyme! Well done!
Great 🫶🏻
Nicely done 🙂