Echoes of Unrequited Chocolaty Love
Inverse Haiku
By DaphsamPublished 2 years ago • Updated 2 years ago • 1 min read
Daphsam Illustration
Your love melts my heart.
Sadly, you don't feel the same.
Two hearts so apart.
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About the Creator
A Dart at Dusk
Seconds ago, the sullen sun set on the two of us… my exuberant furry companion and me. A fresh breeze embraces us, delivering welcome relief from the day’s oppressive heat. His typical stumbling and staggering along — apace with a sloth — has turned into trip-trapping, high-stepping, almost skipping along.
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Comments (10)
This is great to read again, and the simplicity of the words makes you sit and think it through. The middle line carries it nicely. Great take on this challenge😊
Good job! A bit sad though, poor unrequited inverse person.
Unrequited feelings.
That middle line was especially heartbreaking! Your Haiku worked so well both ways!
Very cute! Inverse is no easy task and neither is haiku! Great job!
Excellent job here, Daph!
This was very well put together. ❤️
Nice! This was so clever and so well done!!
Nice one. I have that relationship with chocolate! Lol. I love it, but it makes me sick.
oooooh I love this!! dark chocolate all the way for me! Your illustration is wonderful and perfect.