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Echoes of Eden

Ahsan Ahmad

By Ahsan AhmadPublished 2 years ago 1 min read

In emerald tones, my town lay

A sanctuary of peace, in a bygone day

1993's summer, warm and bright

A time of ponder, a delicate delight

The trees stood tall, with verdant pride

Their canopies, a alleviating shade inside

The discuss was fresh, the breeze so light

As sunbeams moved, through morning's to begin with light

In this green town, I meandered free

A child of nature, wild and carefree

The fragrance of sprouts, the tunes of birds

A ensemble, that resounded words

Memories wait, like foggy dawns

Of chuckling and delight, in unending yawns

A time of blamelessness, a time of glee

In my green town, wild and free

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Ahsan Ahmad

Meet Ahsan Ahmad, an experienced article writer with a passion for crafting engaging and informative content. With 2 years of writing experience.

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Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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  • Luz Marina Peralta2 years ago

    Uno vuelve siempre, a los viejos sitios donde amo la vida...

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