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Echoes of Dreams Deferred

A Journey from Innocence to Experience

By Ravi DPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Echoes of Dreams Deferred
Photo by Sasha Freemind on Unsplash

I dreamt of castles built on clouds,

Their spires reaching for the stars.

But morning came, the mist withdrew,

Revealing only empty jars.

The map I drew with childish hands,

Of treasure buried in the sand,

Led only to forgotten shores

Where footprints vanished from the land.

That wishing well we once believed

Could turn our pennies into gold,

Now stands bone dry, its bucket cracked,

Its secrets never to be told.

The future's price keeps climbing high,

While present moments slip away.

I trade in cautious whispers now,

And save my heart for another day.

_Ravi D

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About the Creator

Ravi D

I'm just a down to earth person who likes to write about events and things, usually inspired by people in my life.

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  • Elle Hayden Bookerabout a year ago

    Such vivid imagery. You paint a picture with your words.

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