Echo at the Threshold
in the space that memory keeps
I must have known—
before the telling,
before the scans and silent rooms.
It was there,
in the breathless pause
between your sentences,
the way your eyes held mine
as if memorizing
how I would carry sorrow.
You said it was nothing—
a shadow,
“Just a little thing,”
tucked behind the ear.
But the trees knew.
They had already begun to still.
In the hush of morning
you folded time
into story:
pages of myth and memory,
mapped with the ink
of all your living.
Your pen—
a sword that never pierced,
only planted.
Every line,
a seed.
You never said goodbye.
You planted shrubs
for each of us in your garden,
watching them
for signs we could not see.
When mine wilted,
you called.
The wind paused
to hear you breathe.
The soil remembered your footsteps.
And Silence—
that patient witness—
kept the space
between your last word
and mine.
Now I gather what you left:
your journals,
your poems,
your unfinished allegory.
I hear your voice
on every margin,
carried root-deep,
unfolding in each turning page—
an echo
still at the threshold.
About the Creator
Rebecca A Hyde Gonzales
I love to write. I have a deep love for words and language; a budding philologist (a late bloomer according to my father). I have been fascinated with the construction of sentences and how meaning is derived from the order of words.



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