Dall-E by Daphsam
Whispering cold breeze
licks at the skeleton trees
mingles with the tweets
from the birds scouring for worms
new birth on the horizon
A Japanese Waka poem structure consist of a 5-7-5-7-7 syllable structure. It's a 5 stanza poem.
About the Creator
A Dart at Dusk
Seconds ago, the sullen sun set on the two of us… my exuberant furry companion and me. A fresh breeze embraces us, delivering welcome relief from the day’s oppressive heat. His typical stumbling and staggering along — apace with a sloth — has turned into trip-trapping, high-stepping, almost skipping along.
By Angie the Archivist 📚🪶4 days ago in Petlife
Comments (5)
Haiku's are hard this would probably melt my brain, lol. loved the image this created
I didn't know about Waka poem, thanks for sharing
This feels wonderful
Well-wrought! And thanks for sharing the note on the less common form. An extension of the Haiku?
This was so wonderful! I've not heard of a Waka before. You executed it so brilliantly!