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Early Risers

4-8-2025

By Ellie HoovsPublished 10 months ago 1 min read
Early Risers
Photo by Glen Carrie on Unsplash

It's 5 am

the sun barely peeking over the horizon.

the old birds are already tittering

spreading the morning "news"

old women huddled at the fence line

gossiping

taking bets

on who will get the first worm

nature poetryRequest FeedbackStream of Consciousnesssurreal poetryFree Verse

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Ellie Hoovs

Breathing life into the lost and broken. Writes to mend what fire couldn't destroy. Poetry stitched from ashes, longing, and stubborn hope.

My Poetry Collection DEMORTALIZING is out now!!!: https://a.co/d/5fqwmEb

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  1. Compelling and original writing

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  • Silver Daux10 months ago

    I loved this! I can never get enough poetry about birds in the morning. Lovely :)

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