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E-Z8

Motels, Highways and Cigarettes

By Dark ConstellationsPublished 11 months ago 1 min read
E-Z8
Photo by Jake Stark on Unsplash

Grey smoke cover dim, buzzing lights by

a black pool of mud, never used before.

By the pacific highway at sleazy E-Z8 motel

On the second floor, I sit and smoke, looking for

Lonesome folks, families, all within and without numbered doors.

The pizza delivery guy outside 204, waiting for tip

those inside can't afford

parked outside room 101, a divorce lawyers car

for a woman who cried “I can do it no more”.

On first floor a grey haired lady on a walk

In miniskirt

her cat in leash, looking for relief.

She walks upon ruins of an American dream in

her high heels.

“Ma'am, you cannot smoke here”

a police man says politely to me, hand to his gun

in the land of the free

I stump my cigarette and taste

that sweet familiar smell of polluted air

of cars in passing to LA.

As the grey smoke who covered those stray motel

ghosts drifts away.

I will sit and watch through

those thin paper walls.

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About the Creator

Dark Constellations

When you can't say things out loud, you must write them down. This is not a choice, it's the core of life, connection. I just try to do that...

Missing a writing community from university days, come say hi:)

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  • L.I.E11 months ago

    So vivid and so sad. Really created a whole movie scene in my head. Love it.

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