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Luminous whirling
cosmos—vibrant essence of
the echoes of time.
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Kristen Balyeat
Words fly to me on the wind, bump into me as I'm strolling the city, splash me in the face while I rest by the river, and shake me awake in the middle of the night—I’m humbly one of the vessels they use to come to life.
Also, i love you:)
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Comments (16)
This was extremely beautiful! I loved it so much!
An astrophysicist would appreciate this, I think. :)
Very nice!...Serene, sublime. 💖
Beautiful haiku.
Beautiful!
Nicely done! 💙 Anneliese
Nice Haiku Kristen. Hope you are all going well! 😊
So evocative of the age of the universe & the knowledge that the lights we see in the night sky come from stars that are long ago dead.
Love your haiku!
Brilliant cosmic haiku. I love how you make the light echo. Excellent work!
I LOVE this!! 🤯🥰😍
Hmmm, this haiku. “The echoes of time” brilliant 😍
Great Haiku!
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This was beautiful Kristen. I love anything space related, its so fascinating. I like how you called space and the stars echoes of time because they technically are! we're literally seeing echoes, and never in real time. Great Haiku!
Well then. This was stunning. Even when reduced to just a few words - your writing is beautiful and inspirational!