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Drowning Slowly

I'm Still Alive

By Mercedes ChavezPublished about a year ago • 1 min read

Submerged.

Feeling as though my head is being held underwater

Fighting to be free

Fighting to stay alive

But the hold they have on me is unwavering

With each wave that comes

I am hit with a flood of memories

Father's heavy hand and cold tone as he says, "I don't love you."

Mother's blind eye and her constant lies

His pain, his suppressed anger, and the slap to the face I still feel today

The sadness and pity in your voice when you told me about her

And the heart-wrenching scream I let out when I drove away

Reliving each memory over and over again

Dying a little inside each time

I am released, I can finally breathe again

The waves have stopped crashing

And I am here

If only for a moment

I am still alive.

sad poetryStream of Consciousness

About the Creator

Mercedes Chavez

Come with me, lets go on an adventure together, see the world through my eyes, let me paint a picture with my words, I promise you will be able to feel what I felt the first time I experienced it. Love, sadness and everything in between.

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