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I'm drowning in my thoughts.
They're saying I should end it all.
It's too hard to fight.
I have no reason to battle them
When I struggle day after day,
Why try to change
When I can just disappear?
No one would know if I did.
Why drown mentally
When doing it is possible?
About the Creator
Rene Peters
I write what I know, usually in the form of poetry. I tend to lean towards mental health, epilepsy, and loss/grieving.


Comments (4)
great work
I don't know whether to feel happy or sad that we're in the same boat 😅 Sending you lots of love and hugs ❤️
Sorry you feel like you are drowning. I though you were ok, when I last chat with you. Even when we are not chatting you are in my thoughts and prayers. I know that feeling. That’s when I pause and wait for that feeling to subside. I learn to be patience with myself with overwhelming feelings. What’s in your self care tool box when you get this way before?
We would knwo if you disappeared and we would miss you. We are here for you. Sad but powerful words