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Drowning in the Sea

My bounty is as boundless as the sea, My love as deep... Juliet Capulet, Romeo and Juliet

By Pamela WilliamsPublished 4 years ago 1 min read
Drowning in the Sea
Photo by Nsey Benajah on Unsplash

Under crescent moon, I cast my line from a boat on the sea. Clouds moved in like a shadow, and upon me came a spiral wind, and waves broke over bow. Choking waves invaded me, while riptides pulled me underneath where fish may have consumed at their desire. Serrated edges I did not see as the moon became your face. Never a gull sang that night, but thoughts of your voice, a conch echo, a spiritual melody. I felt a spin of core and plume, a rise of burning lava. I looked for you and found you as a lighthouse on the shore, reflection in pools of water and drips like fingers plucking harp strings in my darkest hour.

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Pamela Williams

“Suppose I had wings like the dawning day and flew across the ocean. Even then your powerful arm would guide and protect me.”

— Psalm 139:9–10, Contemporary English Version (CEV)

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  • Rob Angeli2 years ago

    Wow, that is beyond beautiful. Such a complete submergence. Much applause.

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