Drink the Blood of the Bats
Trembling I screamed what has been done

Drink the Blood of the Bats
The cave held a heartbeat no human could trust,
a pulse that echoed through the dripping dark,
and the bats stirred gently above my head,
a living cloud waiting for my trembling step.
Their wings brushed the stale unbroken air,
a chorus rising from the cavern’s throat,
as if they knew the hunger that lived in me,
the strange desire I never meant to keep.
I cupped my hands beneath their restless flight,
feeling the heat of bodies that never slept,
waiting for the drop of life to fall from above,
a gift meant only for the lost and unafraid.
The taste was ancient the moment it touched me,
fierce as a storm that remembers every soul,
filling my veins with a trembling new fire,
lifting the night into shapes I could finally hold.
I walked from the cave with silence in my breath,
changed by the darkness I chose to embrace,
knowing the world would never understand why,
yet feeling alive in a way daylight could not forgive.

About the Creator
Marie381Uk
I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️
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Comments (2)
This poem is great, love the intense feeling it has.
Marie, this is fantastic. This is such a courageous piece (and you can’t spell courage without rage). It has such a different feel from most of your recent posts, has a fire in it that can’t be ignored. Well done. Keep being courageous.