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Peel my skin away
Fingernails crimson coated
Wear me like a dress
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Comments (21)
Excellent! Congrats on the win.
I really like the macabre-center of this piece, especially the role the speaker plays in it. Very disturbing! Congratulations on your win!
Congratulations. You deserve it.
I am truly beyond words. It's been 4 years and 179 stories posted to get this first win. THANK YOU to everyone reading and commenting. It means a lot!!
So creepy! Love it. :)
Congratulations on your win! You used one of my favorite words, Crimson, which is also one of my daughters' names.❤
Love this! Congratulations 🎊
This gives me real criminal minds vibes! Congrats on your win!
Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Now that’s gruesome! Congrats on your win!
Awesomely creepy haiku. Congratulations. 😊
Congratulations on the win! That last line is so unsettling.
🎊🎈For some reason. The red atmospheric light behind and around the hand, worked. If you ask me. I am stalling. Do I scroll below the rings, or do I not? I must... I must... But the title though. I still can't tell what is going to happen. Coming straight from the embedded link... The first line... I can imagine... Oh I can almost hear it if that is even possible. Damn. It's like you stopped existing. This was under your skin creepy. This was fantastic. Congratulations on your challenge win 🤗 ❤️ 🖤 👏🏾 👌🏾🎈🎊
Love it congrats !!
Definitely a creepy one. Congrats on your win!
Ah! Very well done and super creepy. Congrats on the win!
a well deserved win, chilling.
Great win. Well done
Congratulations on your win!
Congrats on the win— this is well earned :)
This is vile, in a good way. Definitely a successful horror in just three lines.