Dreams Over Her
From "us" to "you"
Life settles some tricks that tear you to withstand
'Rivals' become souls; who were once 'hand in hand'
Dark seems every pitch and sight of crisis more
Bonds who paddled together stand separate on seashores
Passing comments now like; It's none of their business
Once felt warm in each other's arms, that frame is their witness
Grab your heart in hand to hear a tale of such two souls;
Of Two Love Birds, their beauty and endless strolls
A couple who shared their bite and every meal
'An eye blink', A 'buck-drink'— The boy would always kneel
All the bumps and scars she would bear for him
She was his flashlight when his world was dim
Against the resistance of the world, they were like an entwined sword
Love was all they had, no desire for any reward
Together they withstood, with every breath; parallel
Not one but two stars were harmonizing in dwell
Their world was complete their ties were so strong
A Fairy-Oasis world was where they would belong
He had a couple of dreams, but fear of loss kept him behind
He wanted Her to support him, he was one of a kind
She gave her hair, the jewels, and her diamond ring
She wanted him to fly, true in full swing
His heart usually said, "I'm your debtor, my heart is yours all"
She would hide him and lay her arms if he were to fall
The winds of cold or the burn of the sun
Her heart was set on Kindle, but only for one
Days passed, the winds crashed it started to feel cold
She loved him the same, but his spark demanded a hold
His dreams were nights and days for her
She rooted constantly but his waves lost Fur
They got more than SHE ever looked for
Pieces, jewels, bars, and a nicer car
His trail began to change for he wanted "More and more"
Every moment felt like burden although she wasn't sure
Her screams, her smile started to vanish slow
Their love story was crumbling like presence of mould
The lost affection and small talk being untold
He didn't look like he wanted a soft-back
He wouldn't crave those butterflies; once he lacked
The day arrived soon, Her silence broke
Her heart busted and she continued to choke;
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To be continued...
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Author's note:
I said I would start another series... Here it is...
Thank you for sticking with me, with my poems. Your words and thoughts mean everything to me <3
Next part_ coming soon :)
Part II:
About the Creator
Maryam Batool
I'm 17
I'm a storyteller who loves poems, fiction, and romance. Creativity is my constant companion. I take joy in turning thoughts into worlds. Writing is my way of exploring life and connecting with others
Ready to let my writing bloom!
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Very beautiful! 🤩
Intriguing and heart felt piece. - Well done!!1
Congratulations on making the Leaderboard! Lokking forward to reading more!
Hey! Huge congratulations on snagging 1st place for The Emerging Creator this week! That's such an amazing achievement—well done! 🎉
Well done, Maryam - first place for all your hard work. This is only the start. Calvin
Ohoo! Girl A warm congratulations on winning 1st place for The Emerging Creator this week 🎉🤗🎉 So happy for you 💗 Keep up the good work ✨
I love your word choices, this is an intriguing and heartfelt piece!
This was stirring and emotionally charged! there were some truly exquisite word choices and descriptions! intrigued to see where the next part goes! well done!
Omgggg, that was so sad! I didn't expect it to take such a heartbreak turn 🥺🥺
This piece you’ve written has a deep emotional resonance and beautifully captures the evolution of a relationship from passionate love to heartbreak and distance. Your story is progressing interestingly. Great job, sister! 🤟👏✨ Against the resistance of the world, they were like an entwined sword Love was all they had, no desire for any reward." These lines are a gem! Wonderful✨😍
Excellent congratulation
Bravo Maryam! I got goosebumps reading this masterpiece! "She was his flashlight when his world was dim" What a touching line🥹 "Their world was complete their ties were so strong" You perfectly described the magic of their love in one sentence girl!💕✨ I'm so excited for what’s coming up!😊💗
Wow girl, What a stirring start! The imagery is so vivid, and the emotional depth is just chef’s kiss. You've captured the highs and lows of love so beautifully—it pulls at the heartstrings. That ending though, pure suspense! Can’t wait for the next part. Keep the magic flowing!✨🪄😊