
Down from the Mountain
written after Geoffrey Philp's "Beyond Mountain View"
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Our mountain was not paradise,
but most days it was close enough.
We lived among places
whose names sounded as if
they were plucked from children’s books;
Guava Gap, Duppy Gully,
the meandering Wag Water River.
It takes more to make a fairytale
than whimsical names and natural beauty.
Happily ever after is not always in the cards.
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My mother learned the sensation
of cool tile, pressed against
her cheek, while rude
boys ransacked our home;
the cold blue of a shotgun
pressed between her shoulder blades,
arresting my father more surely
than iron fetters, all the while,
arguing over killing people;
killing my people.
.
The clock had started ticking.
Time lurched quickly on.
I tried to imagine a happy ending.
In my dreams, I zigzagged
the maps of my mind,
returning to the place I was born.
Yet, those images did not
quite mask the fear
that I would never again feel at home,
no matter where I found myself.
.
Ready, or not, like an avalanche,
down from the mountain that final time;
past Stony Hill, Red Gal Ring –
Long Lane seemed shorter than ever.
We bore down fast on the Palisadoes,
where an airplane waited to whisk me away.
I kept my gaze forward, fixed on the sea,
knowing the mountains were mine no more.
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[Author's Note: This poem was inspired by "Beyond Mountain View", written by Geoffrey Philp and included in the collection "Dub Wise", published in 2010 by Peepal Tree Press. You find the book online HERE, or HERE. You can also read and follow Geoffrey here on Vocal - HERE.]
About the Creator
Randy Baker
Poet, author, essayist.
My Vocal "Top Stories":
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Comments (3)
Top notch narrative on poetry! The second stanza was so jarring and rich with sensory imagery!
This was heart wrenching and wonderfully worded. Great poem, Randy!
Beautifully written... I love how quickly this poem took a turn... Wonderful work, Randy!