Double-Dipped Chocolate Glazed Donuts
Forget about your worries and your strife (Thanks, Baloo)
Double-dipped chocolate glazed donuts
Is there anything better than them?
Sugary and fluffy they will help you take your mind off your problems
Try to stop thinking of donuts
Really give it your best shot
All you will get is a brain tied in donut knots
Coated in all that sugar, all that chocolate, filled with raspberry, strawberry or blueberry jam
Taste it in your mind, can you smell the chocolate? Coffee or tea? Maybe hot chocolate...
Icing and fluffy, puffy dough melting on your tongue as you feel it hit all the right spots
One, though, will never be enough, one follows one follows another and another one
Now, what were you worried about before reading this?
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I...really like donuts!
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Paul Stewart
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Comments (7)
As you know, I'm not a huge fan of donuts buttttt reading this made me so hungry. It's almost noon here so I'm gonna go have my lunch now hehehe. Loved your poem!
Haha! Oh my gosh, I wonder just how many people are going to get a chocolate donut after reading this? I'm seriously getting my shoes on to head out to the donut shop. The ending was absolutely brilliant! Such a creative idea! Also, thanks for taking away my worries!
Now I want a donut lol I'm such a basic person though. I only eat plain glazed or plain cake donuts. I don't like creme filled or iced or anything. I'm boring 😂😂 However... This really made me want a sprinkley chocolatey yummy donut for sure 🥰🍩
You got me! Only one thing on my mind now… 🍩
Oh, that was fun. I especially liked the end, and I no idea what I was thinking about before. Well played.
🤣Oh this was evil. I’m stuck riding in the car for hours today with no donuts in sight!!!! 😭
Good try, Paul, but I still don't like donuts ...