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Don't slap bears

A Limerick

By Novel AllenPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
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Three bears roared to be fed

Gave me an ache in the head

I slapped them silly

Made them kinda killy

Can't finish this poem, I'm dead.

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Novel Allen

You can only become truly accomplished at something you love. (Maya Angelou). Genuine accomplishment is not about financial gain, but about dedicating oneself to activities that bring joy and fulfillment.

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    Creative use of language & vocab

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  • Tiffany Gordon3 years ago

    Wow! I didn't see that ending coming! Now that's how you write a limerick! BRAVO!!!!

  • J. R. Lowe3 years ago

    Bahahah nice work 👏

  • Quincy.V3 years ago

    I appreciate the creativity and humor in the poem.👏👍

  • At first I thought this was going to be inspired by "Cocaine Bear", then as I started reading I was like, "oh, maybe a modern rendition of The Three Little Bears." But nope, a funny cautionary tale in limerick form!

  • Test3 years ago

    This was fun on so many levels! Thanks for being such a beautiful soul and having so much fun with what you do! Always keeping me inspired!💜

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