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Don't check my BP!

Part II of -Can you check my BP?-

By Maryam BatoolPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Don't check my BP!
Photo by Allison Heine on Unsplash

Don't check my BP, I feel alright

I did not quit but I left that Fight

Pains are beneath- so I'll go to height

I was scared in dark, but now I love light

Don't check my BP, I'm already bright

I left those ways, I crave new sights

My arm has recovered, whom in pain I bite

I'll paint my room to shine, with white

Don't check my BP, it's almost night

But I'm happy you see, I've got my might

My brain is now TENDER, It's no more tight

I'll cheer if I want, I'll not remain Quiet

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About the Creator

Maryam Batool

I'm 17

I'm a storyteller who loves poems, fiction, and romance. Creativity is my constant companion. I take joy in turning thoughts into worlds. Writing is my way of exploring life and connecting with others

Ready to let my writing bloom!

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  • kainat about a year ago

    Your poem beautifully captures the journey from pain to healing, radiating resilience and the powerful embrace of light and renewal.

  • Karan w. about a year ago

    That's a fantastic poem! Each line is extraordinary! Keep it up 👍

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