Don't check my BP!
Part II of -Can you check my BP?-
By Maryam BatoolPublished about a year ago • 1 min read
Photo by Allison Heine on Unsplash
Don't check my BP, I feel alright
I did not quit but I left that Fight
Pains are beneath- so I'll go to height
I was scared in dark, but now I love light
Don't check my BP, I'm already bright
I left those ways, I crave new sights
My arm has recovered, whom in pain I bite
I'll paint my room to shine, with white
Don't check my BP, it's almost night
But I'm happy you see, I've got my might
My brain is now TENDER, It's no more tight
I'll cheer if I want, I'll not remain Quiet
About the Creator
Maryam Batool
I'm 17
I'm a storyteller who loves poems, fiction, and romance. Creativity is my constant companion. I take joy in turning thoughts into worlds. Writing is my way of exploring life and connecting with others
Ready to let my writing bloom!



Comments (2)
Your poem beautifully captures the journey from pain to healing, radiating resilience and the powerful embrace of light and renewal.
That's a fantastic poem! Each line is extraordinary! Keep it up 👍