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Don't Ask (Just Do)

Like You Did When It Was New

By Susan WilkinsPublished 4 years ago 1 min read
Brilliance VI (Unicorn Sparkle) - Artist: Susan Wilkins

Are you ok?

What do you need?

A hug without asking

A kiss I didn't initiate

Don't ask, just do

Like you did when it was new

Are you ok?

What do you need?

A foot rub without asking

A compliment I didn't initiate

Don't ask, just do

Like you did when it was new

Are you ok?

What do you need?

Your attention I don't have to ask for

Conversation I didn't initiate

Don't ask, just do

Like you did when it was new

You don't say my name the same

Is 5 years the end of the game?

I need that sparkle

I need that flirt

Where has it gone

My feelings are hurt!

Are you ok?

What do you need?

Some fun I didn't ask for

A little action I didn't initiate

Don't ask, just do

Like you did when it was new

Don't ask, just do.

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About the Creator

Susan Wilkins

I write stories and poetry. Lately I have put up a science fiction story and a children's story. I love to write and Vocal has given me a platform to do that. P.S. I love reader comments! Let me know what you think. Please enjoy!

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  • Joi4 months ago

    Beautiful words and confirmation

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