Do you remember?
It was a pleasure to meet you...
I remember that night
Oh so vividly
I walked by
And you said
“Hi!!”
We drank liquor
Got in rotation...
I felt the vibration...
From the temptations,
I twerked on you
Like a scallywag...
Fresh on the market,
I threw that thang back
And to my surprise
You caught it!
Now I'm up in the kitchen
Trying to make you
Some chicken...
And you're in the front room just rapping
Talking about trapping, and packing.
Meanwhile, I'm on the phone
With my best friend
Like “Hey, what's happening!”
It was a moment that started a lifetime...
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Rachel Reviews: The Spiral Archive by Pieter Hendrik
It's difficult for me to know where to start with a review of this book as it was, for me, an entirely unique experience and one that I'll probably never have again. I don't want that to be interpreted as unenjoyable but it has left me scratching my head a little and ruminating on its content, its themes and its characters.
By Rachel Deeminga day ago in BookClub
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You had me at “scallywag”
Love this, Lonzo. You have such a thoughtful way of expressing your memories. Really loving reading what you're writing.
A moment that started a lifetime. That’s reallyyyyy beautiful!
honestly, just felt the happiness here in these words!
Written from the heart. Beautiful
That was great, ya scallywag. Lol. Love it.
"Like a scallywag"- I'm just sitting here smiling for you. That was excellent Lonzo! 💝
Moments that change our life forever. Beautifully written 💕
This is such a wonderful, casual yet engaging description of an encounter, a single moment that would not remain isolated but rather connect two through a lifetime. Is it too much to hope that this is autobiographical, that this joy belongs to you?
Seeing blips of your life through poetry is beautiful.
I love it! Keep twerking!!! Awesome! 🥰😍😘