Distraction in the Evening
Against the Call of the Sky
By Steve HansonPublished 3 years ago • 1 min read
Photo by Tadej Skofic on Unsplash
Distant fields, marbled with penumbras of clouds,
Isolated within the cradle of the hills. Here, I
Stand, repose against the waiting wind, their touch
Tantalizing a flavor of the autumn chill, in the
Rain-scented late-summer world. My phone buzzes,
Again. My scheduled task for the day. It might be
Clean the lint trap, balance your checkbook, breathe—
Truly, I can’t recall. But here, I can see, against the
Illustrated watercolors of the dying sun, the
Oranges, reds, deep purples and onyx blacks—
No. Not distracted. Only here.
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Steve, I love your vocabulary choices and descriptive language that played on the senses of the reader in this poem! Great work!
I love this. Beautifully written.