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Distraction in the Evening

Against the Call of the Sky

By Steve HansonPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
Distraction in the Evening
Photo by Tadej Skofic on Unsplash

Distant fields, marbled with penumbras of clouds,

Isolated within the cradle of the hills. Here, I

Stand, repose against the waiting wind, their touch

Tantalizing a flavor of the autumn chill, in the

Rain-scented late-summer world. My phone buzzes,

Again. My scheduled task for the day. It might be

Clean the lint trap, balance your checkbook, breathe—

Truly, I can’t recall. But here, I can see, against the

Illustrated watercolors of the dying sun, the

Oranges, reds, deep purples and onyx blacks—

No. Not distracted. Only here.

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  • Test3 years ago

    Steve, I love your vocabulary choices and descriptive language that played on the senses of the reader in this poem! Great work!

  • t.r.h. blue3 years ago

    I love this. Beautifully written.

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