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Disconnected

A Dancing with Distraction Challenge Entry

By Paul StewartPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
Disconnected
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Do you ever feel so disconnected from the rest of civilisation that you could be in the most crowded place on the planet, or at least local to you, and still feel like you are on your own?

I sometimes stop and experience that strange detachment you can only get from our modern world and society. In the shops, surrounded by people, with no one paying any attention

Sometimes, and it is sometimes, if they bump into you, or you are in their way, or they need you for something specific, they will interact. A nice distraction before the isolation sets in again

Tragically, I know so many reading this experience it. The world has become such a cold place in so many ways when you consider how easily different people from different sides of the world can connect

Robotic uprising is not something we need to worry about. Isolation and solitary existences are more pertinent.

Although, it's worth considering that it would be harder to fight against the robotic uprising if we were all islands

Connections with other people can be messy - I'll be the first to admit that

They can leave you with the deepest of scars whether they end or not, whether you drift apart or are torn apart or stick together through thick and thin

It can be hard to trust people...especially once you've been burned

Opening your heart and mind may come with rich blessings but also devastation

Now you need to work out for yourself...is it worth it? Are you worth it? Do you want someone to stand beside you...whether it's for a robotic uprising, zombie apocalypse, or simply to enjoy the changing of the seasons and all that life brings, good, bad, happy, sad.

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Thanks for reading!

Wasn't entirely sure about publishing this, but oh well, here you go. I let the words guide me a little on it.

Here are a couple of others you might like:

You can also take a look at the rest of my work here.

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About the Creator

Paul Stewart

Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran3 years ago

    Nope, I don't want anybody to stand beside me or with me. There's nothing more devastating in this world than having a human stand with me. Freaking human. No robots uprising or zombie apocalypse would be able to hurt me more than a human can. Sorry for my rant Paul, lovely poem!

  • I'm glad that you did decide to publish this, Paul. I believe there are many who will resonate with what you have written. I know I certainly did.

  • Test3 years ago

    How do you keep doing that? How do you keep writing things that I think are your best work, only to turn around and write something better? This acrostic challenge is really working out for me, because I keep getting to read what you clearly excel at. I’ve been craving real human interaction for quite some time now, but people are way too distracted to be fully present, even when they’re physically there.

  • Dana Crandell3 years ago

    Such an thoughtful piece, and a great challenge entry. I'm a bit on the fence when it comes to personal interaction these days, and I think that may be a result of the recent forced isolation. I mean, I don't actually have to get dressed for a Zoom meeting. On the other hand, I abhor Zoom meetings, but I digress. Great job on this one, Paul, and yes, you are worth it.

  • Gina C.3 years ago

    This is so, so moving, my friend. ❤️ I feel your thoughts on so many levels here-- the longing for connection, but also feeling that -- as an introvert -- I might be part of the problem. 🥹 I really loved how you structured this; it was like poetry but also like a little journey through your thoughts. Very profound and well done! Also -- you are worth it! ❤️

  • Test3 years ago

    Every. Single. Word. Hits home! Fantastic, Paul. So glad you decided to publish this 💕🙂

  • yes, you ARE worth it. Although it is easy to stay "invisible:

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