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Dirty Bubbles

Better Hurry...

By Thavien YliasterPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
Dirty Bubbles
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Grab the baby out of the bath is what You must do

Since the bubbles happened, the water quickly changed hue

Drain the contents and flush them down the toilet with a cup from the sink

Hurry now before the room starts to stink

And make sure that the baby gets cleaned too

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Author's Notes: This Limerick was originally commented on Donna Renee's Limerick, "Bath Time for Baby." Please, enjoy her work.

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Thavien Yliaster

Thank You for stopping by. Please, make yourself comfortable. I'm a novice poet, fiction writer, and dream journalist.

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  • Donna Renee3 years ago

    aww thanks for the shout out! :D I'm glad you submitted this one for real, too, not just in the comments haha

  • I had a feeling a limerick might come from your initial reponse to Donna's limerick, LOL! This is a wonderful commentary and continuation.

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