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Did Unto Others

This Loyalty Bleeds Into Disloyalty

By Tommy BallardPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
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I always tried to do unto others

What I wish had been done for me

I didn't feel loved

So I loved with my whole heart

I didn't get a helping hand

So I kept mine outstretched and my arms apart

I didn't ever feel safe

So I made it my duty to protect and be a haven

I gave, I gave, I gave

Every part of me that I could

I gave my skin and bones

My heart and soul

The dirt under my nails

The blood in my arteries

I gave as much as I could of all

The air in my lungs were the last of which I yielded a piece

When the sun had finally set and I couldn't believe the rotations of the timepiece

I found it's value only to me was inherent

I gave all I could but to the ones I thought I could make joyful

I found a disappointment, a growing resentment, something that made them disloyal

As I began to think I had provided all of me I could

My brain turned to stone, as I found my mind was stolen, just one more thing took

I tried all I could to do unto others

What I wished would be done for me

Yet now I return to who I was before

Minus another missing piece.

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About the Creator

Tommy Ballard

I'm a professional writer, a poet, a digital artist and an amateur musician. In my free time, I'm often be found pondering magnets, breaking and entering random homes to steal locks of human hair, and dosing snoring sleepyheads with Zyns

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  • Grz Colm2 years ago

    Great work! I appreciate your thoughts and excellent use of repetition! 😊👍

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