Did Unto Others
This Loyalty Bleeds Into Disloyalty

I always tried to do unto others
What I wish had been done for me
I didn't feel loved
So I loved with my whole heart
I didn't get a helping hand
So I kept mine outstretched and my arms apart
I didn't ever feel safe
So I made it my duty to protect and be a haven
I gave, I gave, I gave
Every part of me that I could
I gave my skin and bones
My heart and soul
The dirt under my nails
The blood in my arteries
I gave as much as I could of all
The air in my lungs were the last of which I yielded a piece
When the sun had finally set and I couldn't believe the rotations of the timepiece
I found it's value only to me was inherent
I gave all I could but to the ones I thought I could make joyful
I found a disappointment, a growing resentment, something that made them disloyal
As I began to think I had provided all of me I could
My brain turned to stone, as I found my mind was stolen, just one more thing took
I tried all I could to do unto others
What I wished would be done for me
Yet now I return to who I was before
Minus another missing piece.
About the Creator
Tommy Ballard
I'm a professional writer, a poet, a digital artist and an amateur musician. In my free time, I'm often be found pondering magnets, breaking and entering random homes to steal locks of human hair, and dosing snoring sleepyheads with Zyns
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