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Desire Lines

Five Tankas #1

By Conor DarrallPublished 5 years ago Updated 5 years ago 1 min read
Desire Lines
Photo by Jonas Jaeken on Unsplash

1

Deep in the Cellar

Bottle Crusher chews the glass

Spitting milky grit

It’s used to make new highways,

I taste new roads in my spit.

2

Above, the night crowd:

Stomping, hooting, hooded eyes

Lost in their song

Sweat-stained clothes from magazines

All so scared they don’t belong

3

Into the Crusher

Like reject, broken bottles:

Our place in the world.

Who go astray from their roads.

To the cellar we are hurled

4

Trust desire lines

Those thin paths for wanderers

In the woods clearing

Let your feet take you onward

Sing far from night crowd’s hearing

5

The Crusher has stopped

Overfed and choking now,

Amber blinking light.

I let it choke and leave then,

Out to an uncertain night.

inspirational

About the Creator

Conor Darrall

Short stories, poetry and some burble . Irish traditional musician, medieval swords guy, draoi and strange egg. Bipolar/ADD/CPTSD/Brain Damage. Currently querying my novel 'The Forgotten 47' - @conordarrall / www.conordarrall.com

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  • Ashe Lawson2 years ago

    Gorgeous! You have such a unique way of capturing images. "I taste new roads in my spit." I just love it.

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