1
Deep in the Cellar
Bottle Crusher chews the glass
Spitting milky grit
It’s used to make new highways,
I taste new roads in my spit.
2
Above, the night crowd:
Stomping, hooting, hooded eyes
Lost in their song
Sweat-stained clothes from magazines
All so scared they don’t belong
3
Into the Crusher
Like reject, broken bottles:
Our place in the world.
Who go astray from their roads.
To the cellar we are hurled
4
Trust desire lines
Those thin paths for wanderers
In the woods clearing
Let your feet take you onward
Sing far from night crowd’s hearing
5
The Crusher has stopped
Overfed and choking now,
Amber blinking light.
I let it choke and leave then,
Out to an uncertain night.
About the Creator
Conor Darrall
Short stories, poetry and some burble . Irish traditional musician, medieval swords guy, draoi and strange egg. Bipolar/ADD/CPTSD/Brain Damage. Currently querying my novel 'The Forgotten 47' - @conordarrall / www.conordarrall.com
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Comments (1)
Gorgeous! You have such a unique way of capturing images. "I taste new roads in my spit." I just love it.